Saubi1234
Please pick one tense and stick to it when writing each sentence Its not great to switch between paragraphs without a good reason but going from past to present in a single sentence Is garbage... english may not be your first language but if youre going to write in it at least learn some Middleschool basics.. find someone To edit your chapters or something I dunno.. while I appreciate the need for fast releases and im sure no one agrees with me I would prefer slower releases with better edited english Im almost certain a lot of the fault lies in the webnovel medium however it makes for a poor reading experience for something that could be great..... if you ignore the shameless ED plagiarsim....