Comments of chapter undefined of Alien Evolution System

incredible ending, made me sad, but not meaninglessly so. I'm glad she would get her wish in the end, rest In peace Karla

I really like that she actually died because I feel like it would've been a lot more tragic if the collector killed her because she was no longer useful.

With this conclusion, I've gotten a glimpse at how the author wishes to develop the story. I honestly like it. Congrats to the author for genuinely being able to make the story not feel like there's plot armor. On the content of the chapter, the MC didn't survive because of his own power, but the death of his temporary companion and her power up makes it all connect very nicely-it feels real.

A collecter genuinely going out of their way to comfort a "tinkerer" in their final moments... Probably the first that it's ever happened... Probably the first collecter to hesitate to eat something too... Its the small things with our collecter that say the most...

I will be honest: you made me cry (a lot)

awesome conclusion. I'm so ready for the ice tundra

Excellent ending! That part where the Collector just stared at her heart while in the middle of a raging snow feels like a symbolism of emptiness. It gave me goosebumps

I was thinking, Kara will become an important character but she died so I gess, I was wrong! Super Arc!

Great ending to the arc cant wait for the next one to begin

Worth of a Movie right there!

Rest In Peace Krala, may you never be alone again.

Pain

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Absolutely amazing end to volume 1. This may be my favorite novel yet on this site!

Nice

Ahhh, I can’t wait for tomorrow

Thanks for the chapter This arc and the ending was amazing so i will be donating all the stones i get to the collective

She had three chapters of backstory, but it felt like much more. What do i mean? She was introduced to us as a source of information and genes, a little girl that had a smarty head and some knowledge about magic. That was it. Then, she said "sorry". She telled us that she was useless and worthless, and being at her side would only bring pain and suffering. She teached magic like a book - in the literal meaning -, she sacrifice a hand and got some blows, she teached about roots and emotions, felt wonder about a being that would only bring death for it's purpose, for the Collective. She didn't feared it, she trusted it, she protect it, and just before going to the Dark Place, she felt relivied that it was still alived. What i'm saying? Yes, Krala had a short and terrible life, as well a tragic end... But that is enough. Enough to tell that i feel sad about her death, that i will remember her sacrifice, that i smiled in the final; knowing that she was the only humanoid who made the Collector hesitate and... Comfort. Seriously, thanks, John. Krala was amazing, so was this arc. My grammar is terrible, i know. Sorry for that, as my english is only good for read, not write or speak. Portuguese is my strong language, hah.