Excuse me, I'm just going to keep simping.
Wording, perfect. Portrayal, perfect. Emotions, perfect. Falling into the water, perfect. Waking up in desolation, perfect.
I like how she isn't just flailing about in the water and has a valid reason for drowning.
This is just the beginning, but the tension is real. The author is getting better and better with the words. There's also a quote here, and it's such a beautiful quote! Thank you for this awesome chapter! ❤
I like how the pacing of the novel is. It takes three chapters for Yoon-Yi to time travel back in the past. I got the feeling that her grandmother's hanbok had some connection to it or I might just imagining something?
