I love the story line and it makes for a wonderful read. However, I noticed that it needs to be well edited, as there are some typos and a few grammatical errors. Overall, once I started, I haven't been able to put it down. You did a good job
Dani is so avoiding the answers to every ? Alex has asked and the fact that she hates the sound of Tyra Richards name just shows you that she's jealous and really likes alex and doesn't want him to be with anyone else but her😏