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Comments of chapter undefined of The To-Do List

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Below_the_current
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I really like this so far, it catches your curiosity from the beginning. Really well done. As feedback, I would say that some parts were a bit confusing and maybe the descriptions of the characters felt a little lacking, like for the main characters, not Raizel.

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Mnuk
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ooh I like the modern times wuxia setting!

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Euphii
EuphiiLv15Euphii

Thank u for sharing this beautiful story with us. ♡

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NOBODY_BL
NOBODY_BLLv14NOBODY_BL

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mnini
mniniLv11mnini

this is so well written

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Shade_Arjuun
Shade_ArjuunLv14Shade_Arjuun

Nice hook. I was already interested in Lyle, he has the vibe of a goo/not so good guy. the story is great, the English is fabulous and the flow is not confusing

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Harmattan
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nadya13
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LitTLeBeLLE
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Euphii
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Dieu_Van
Dieu_VanLv11Dieu_Van

Hmm

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PotaTOE_God
PotaTOE_GodLv4PotaTOE_God

I'm curious is the protagonist the top/seme/gong?

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kittykat_02
kittykat_02Lv12kittykat_02

I'm already hooked & excited to know more about all characters mentioned in this chapter!! Thank you for your hard work & I'm hyped to know how things are going to be in next chapters! 🥺🙏💖💖

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Yaminoyosei
YaminoyoseiLv12Yaminoyosei

the start is very interesting. gotta say I'm intrigued to see what happens next

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SabergKeys
SabergKeysLv2SabergKeys

Wow! This is really intriguing

Vanilla_Chino
Vanilla_ChinoLv3Vanilla_Chino

Pretty long chapter but off to a good start

CathySesshoumaru
CathySesshoumaruLv12CathySesshoumaru

Starting reading. I liked it.