Eternal_Demon
Eternal_Demon:Ranulf died due to the hit while Kadyn died because of drowning.
Late to the party, but I just wanted to say that the second half of this chapter seemed a lot easier to read than the first. You may have not realized it while writing, but it seemed that early on you were trying a bit to hard to emphasize things with lots and lots of adjectives (like I get it, the main character’s eyes are blue). It made reading those parts have the opposite intended effect and came off as unnatural. I think the second half was easier to read because you that’s when you began naturally writing and didn’t try to force anything. Something to keep in mind as you continue writing.
I say, author-san please don't start demeaning your book from the very first chapter. it's bad for business cause people may automatically think the book will be really bad while it's not. wait till about 5 readers complain about the MC being stuuupid then u can say that the MC will be stupid for the first 100 or 200 chapters y'know something like that.