Kagetanehiruko
I think the best thing you could do with the story is to add a few twists to it. It is still a good story, but I think it would be in your best interest and the readers best interest for there to be some newer concepts. The idea of the reincarnated daughter is good, but I believe you still have the ability to improve upon this story. Take your time donât rush. Use this as an opportunity to become a better writer and story teller. Keep up the good work though.