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FLAPPY_DUCK95009mthCommentedI love both. You should at least do one or the oth er
Like GX or 5D?- FLAPPY_DUCK95001yrCommented
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-Not Strong Bastards(if you know what I mean) - FLAPPY_DUCK95001yrCommented
Hey, you are doing pretty well. The flow of the story is interesting, and I think the plot is going well so far, but I think at some point, it will definitely start to get a bit dull. You can keep going as you are, but at some point, you’ll need to spice it up a bit, do something a bit unexpected. Otherwise, keep up the good work.
Ch 6 Author's note - FLAPPY_DUCK95001yrReplied to Max_Dreamscape
Couldn’t agree more. I’ve read a ton of Harry Potter fanfiction, but it is one of the best I’be read.
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Yes, I think it would be a good thing for the future of this novel. It has been okay so far, but it would be better to fix problems before they matter too much.
"Yes" - FLAPPY_DUCK95001yrCommented
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2. Create two separate versions of the story. - FLAPPY_DUCK95001yrCommented
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{Not to join} - FLAPPY_DUCK95001yrCommented
Adrien in Hufflepuff and Aurelius in Slytherin. Spice it up.
Also, what house do you think Adrien and Aurelius will end up in? Comment your thought down below. - FLAPPY_DUCK95001yrCommented
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No! Adrien dating someone older than him is kinda hot! - FLAPPY_DUCK95001yrCommented
I think the best thing you could do with the story is to add a few twists to it. It is still a good story, but I think it would be in your best interest and the readers best interest for there to be some newer concepts. The idea of the reincarnated daughter is good, but I believe you still have the ability to improve upon this story. Take your time don’t rush. Use this as an opportunity to become a better writer and story teller. Keep up the good work though.
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