Kagetanehiruko
The story is truly unique . The mc is a fun character . Who actually likes to drink , likes to dance , likes to sing. And with his talent or usefulness he makes lots of friends and allies or connections . And I kinda like how he seduces woman's in a different way every time. And despite being not around the main characters , I'm not lost in the story . And though he's a warmonger , not by his choice ofcourse . Also with his adventure I learned Four of the seven kingdoms and the how beautiful or horrible the people live there lives . Though he has honor as well but in a different way than Eddard Starks . And the POVs man..... there the best .
I pretty much agree with what you have stated.. I dont really care about the Identity of the wife aslong as shes loyal and has an interesting charecter. Harem is fine. Stark based fics are overused, bring something new. Being the king is just ridiculous. Would love to see some Essos, but if its not in your cards then I respect it. The MC doesnt have any reason to pledge fealty to anyone, in fact, with his charecter wouldnt a more free thinking mercenary type role suit him?? Daenerys was personally my favourite charecter (until the last couple of seasons) so I would like her to not be an enimy atleast, but that doesnt mean I want the mc to support her without any precedent.. Enjoying reading <3
your doing great with the story author , keep it original and dont fall for the same boring righting every fanfiction story of game of thrones has, it was nice for a change to have a mc why wasent totally op, wanting to be king, or going arount killing whoever he likes left and right. I think this story is great it has so mach potential and doesnt need anything change. Keep up the good work.
Mate, Ive never seen a GoT episode every in my life. All the stuff I know are from the rare few fanfics I read on this. I actually normally hate GoT fanfics with a passion as I find this world and its characters too stupid. Also too many P.O.V shifts. The fact that Im reading your book right now can show that its a pretty alright book. That is high praise from someone who would drop a multiverse travel book because they went to the GoT world.
This is the first GoT fanfic I have read. I am really enjoying the story. Yes the MC is sleeping around but honestly so would just about any man. Yes the grammar is bad but so what, I have read hundreds of machine translated novels and they are much worse. Overall good job author, keep up the good work.
hey man, I agree with a lot of your comments. I'm mostly intrigued by your story because it's fresh and new from a lot of the other fiction out there, so stay strong in negative comments and people wanting you to change the direction of your story. Your characters personality and purpose and drive are what make this story stand out from others.