Comments of chapter undefined of Inhuman Warlock
Inhuman Warlock
Demonic_angel
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Man I don't know, but I started to get bored. When he awaken his S-rank power we didn't know how powerful it is, I thought he awaken some S-rank ability then train it to become powerful so he can control it, but it seems like its not. I know he don't know much about the world and how it works cuz he's in the facility and just recently go out. I hope he'll gain some knowledge about the world, organizations, families, and government. I was happy when he trust some people again, if it's a super villain protagonist please don't make him aloof. Just Give him normal emotion (but that later cuz he need to overcome his trauma) so he can associates with some people and it's hard to find a smart Psychopath đ . And I have a question. when he open the door in the restaurant why didn't it burned like ashes? He touched it even though he wore a glove would it work? cuz he is touching the glove.
Ignoring the plotholes(Quite a few) I want to talk about the pacing bro. It's quite boring to see Lucifer killing same people in the way. We already saw how he would kill and how unemotional he is. But reading the same thing ticks me. Please work on the pacing. Pacing of the novel is as important as character and plot development.
