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Comments of chapter undefined of Douluo Dalu - The True Vampire

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Douluo Dalu - The True Vampire

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NebulousArcana
NebulousArcanaLv14NebulousArcana

You didn’t invent crack-fics just wanted to comment that after seeIng the synopsis.

3yr
Feign_God
Feign_GodAuthorFeign_God

So what did you think of the story other than the grammar and proper English. The chapter was 1245 words. Did it feel short or was it okay length?

NebulousArcana:On the off chance you meant that you made the fan-fic up on the spot then congratulations your literally in the same club as anyone who writes fan-fics except yours only has one chapter.
3yr
Feign_God
Feign_GodAuthorFeign_God

There will be 5 trial chapters, you can decide if you want to read it by then, it will mostly be essential things. I honestly have put no thought into this story, it will mostly be off the top of the dome. I do basic plans for the chapter I write as I write it. You can expect the 5 chapters to be done by the end of the weekend. Umm... what else could I say... The next chapter's title is Spirit Awakening. Thanks for checking this book out.

3yr
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Zeroz7
Zeroz7Lv3Zeroz7

mm, bueno el primer capitulo no dice mucho, talvez que será muy fuerte porque puede expresar su espíritu sin despertarlo aun?, un vampiro en douluo seria interesante(mientras no sea el típico hay no bebo sangre), igual agregare haber tus 5 caps, talvez sea una buena historia?

3yr
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