Feign_God
"So inspiring I went to sleep to pursue my dreams."
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Air?
huh?
Nuke code?!?!?!! We dropping bombs out here?!
didn't do the squats!!!
No, I'm afraid you've miscalculated, nobody has enough time to finish one piece. You will need a second or 3rd immortal life to get through it all.
Oscar is also an English-sounding name, in the series. What about him?
consider it fixed
the "little further" part?
Ohh, there were some repititions, they were there for a purpose, like the "no" The little kid's fantasy shattered as he was hit with cold hard reality, square in the face. and the "no!" A clean-cut single-word response left no room for 'ordinary negotiation'. these 2 draw parallels between the mother and son, showing their similar personalities. Pretty genius, I know. 😁
There will be 5 trial chapters, you can decide if you want to read it by then, it will mostly be essential things. I honestly have put no thought into this story, it will mostly be off the top of the dome. I do basic plans for the chapter I write as I write it. You can expect the 5 chapters to be done by the end of the weekend. Umm... what else could I say... The next chapter's title is Spirit Awakening. Thanks for checking this book out.
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