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Comments of chapter undefined of Solo Player Arvin

V_Avhiy
V_AvhiyLv2V_Avhiy

So many plotholes in the prologue chapter, u should revise it, it's not that hard. I know this isn't even important to the story, but this prologue was my first impression, and I already trying hard to give it a chance to read the next chapter.

Neokaiser
NeokaiserLv2Neokaiser

OK so this is an Indian made novel. I hope it doesn't turn out like a Chinese one. I dislike Chinese supremacist novels so I hope it doesn't turned to be one.

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PetraZi
PetraZiLv4PetraZi

Good start for the story. The MC's name is horrifying. I've changed it to Alvin in my head.

Killercam360
Killercam360Lv14Killercam360

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv13DeathLingers

here because it says op hope in not lied to. interesting so far

vkg313
vkg313Lv6vkg313

good prologue

mephisto_KOJ
mephisto_KOJLv2mephisto_KOJ

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon