Comments of chapter undefined of The Adventurer System

Again with the nonsense - he looks at his status screen and somehow she's able to see it?? what, she's magically viewing through his eyes? otherwise the screen would have to be a physical object that can be touched.

If this happens again i wil remove this book from my library the reason any reader stays with a good story is because the reader is able to become a part of the main characters life through all of his or hers ups and downs that being said it's the main character that is the glue that holds it all together all plotlines form around what he does you see I do not care about secondary characters only the growth and the maturity of the main character

also how can you compare her fight with the drap down balls to walls fight that must have just taken place out there but we will never know now will wd

interesting. atleast shes not being too pushy but still annoying

hi the history looks good but is more like you happening to be more or less lost on your thoughts for the system

Thanks