Jigx
Ufortunately, I agree with the above comment. Your grammar is all over the place and, in fact, gets in the way of telling your story. You mix tenses and perspectives and lots of other things. I would suggest you try reading your story out loud. You would be surprised what you can uncover when you do so.
i cant help but feel like theres a big plot hole here since it was after the match and in my eyes his opponent assaulted him and crippled/ tried to kill him and nothing was done about it? is that how people run these world championships nowadays allowing people to get away with criminal offenses like that? even if he is under 18 that should still be a criminal offense just assault and battery with intent to kill/cripple is already jail/prison time and no one did anything about it?!?!?!?!?!!?