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Comments of chapter undefined of please reset the booktitle Carrots123 20231218092329 25

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Ancient_Reader
Ancient_ReaderLv6Ancient_Reader

I'm just saying, killing them is still within the Mc's capabilities, it'll have been a dangerous fight but the MC would have won.

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GreedAF
GreedAFLv4GreedAF

I honestly don't like reading about MCs struggling. Most people read fictional stories as a form of stress relief and getting away from real life struggles so seeing more of the same thing in a setting where you just want to enjoy the little things is honestly tiring. I am not saying that this is bad story or something, but just not my cup of tea anymore. Keep up the good work author👍👍.

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DarkSeid
DarkSeidLv14DarkSeid

Ahhh come on author! Give us a bonus chapter today

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5Yuri_is_Ntr

The problem is not that new opponent come and mc struggle under his hand. The problem is, we read only 1 chapter before that he finally stopped fighting and win for once. And right after that betrayal and another fight. Even in shounen manga,there much more time to show what mc got and win after a fight. In this one we don't have luxury to win. We have a Neverending battle with mc struggling and being beaten. I don't know if this a good thing or bad thing, though. With the whole week between chapters, readers whould be dissatisfied with building up and slacking off of mc. Like in your dxd fanfic. So I really don't know what to say. Slow useless build that would pay off probably in next century or shounen on steroids that's doesn't give you time to enjoy it? I am not saying those works a bad, I like them both. But this feels like a torture. Pick you poison, comrades.

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Lord_Disaster
Lord_DisasterLv4Lord_Disaster

when do you update this story again?

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NulZilch
NulZilchLv5NulZilch

Great chapter as usual, But author you need to decide what story wants to be. There has been like only 17 chapters, so it's still just the start of things, and it has been top notch in all aspects, but in those chapters there have been 4 big events MC has been though. Betrayal and Escape from Krypton, Doomsday, Conquering Viltrumites and then their betrayal. It has been fast paced and thrilling, but i guess everyone Imagined it would have more wish fullfilment in it. I mean story description still says it would be Mass Harem. Is it the initial setup that'll change in future to more wishfullfilment according to your outline, or does the story has changed it's character over the 17 weeks, or do we always had wrong expectations from your story?

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Bakimaru
BakimaruLv2Bakimaru

I don't know it's getting kind of boring. Struggling protagonist is fine but you have to care about the protagonist in the first place. You haven't made me care enough about your MC to read him getting pummeled over and over. Good luck with the story.

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Bothstar
BothstarLv4Bothstar

😎👍

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Flightless_Man
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Thanks for the chapter

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Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

ThanksThanksThanksThanks

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PhantomNite629
PhantomNite629Lv15PhantomNite629

thx for the chap

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Khors
KhorsLv15Khors

👍

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Everything_Forever
Everything_ForeverLv13Everything_Forever

Thanks for the chap.

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xhdv
xhdvLv4xhdv

thank you for the chapter 😁

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Firefly4545
Firefly4545Lv14Firefly4545

And thanks for the chapter

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Firefly4545
Firefly4545Lv14Firefly4545

And now we wait for next week 😒

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Wellington_Lucas
Wellington_LucasLv4Wellington_Lucas

Obrigado pelo capítulo incrível Autor-San!!❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍

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Mamonga_az
Mamonga_azLv2Mamonga_az

Thank you for the Chapter

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Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5Deadrule_vivek

hmm....let's see

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daniel_rahn
daniel_rahnLv2daniel_rahn

Thx for the awesome chap bro