Carrots123
I honestly don't like reading about MCs struggling. Most people read fictional stories as a form of stress relief and getting away from real life struggles so seeing more of the same thing in a setting where you just want to enjoy the little things is honestly tiring. I am not saying that this is bad story or something, but just not my cup of tea anymore. Keep up the good work authorđđ.
The problem is not that new opponent come and mc struggle under his hand. The problem is, we read only 1 chapter before that he finally stopped fighting and win for once. And right after that betrayal and another fight. Even in shounen manga,there much more time to show what mc got and win after a fight. In this one we don't have luxury to win. We have a Neverending battle with mc struggling and being beaten. I don't know if this a good thing or bad thing, though. With the whole week between chapters, readers whould be dissatisfied with building up and slacking off of mc. Like in your dxd fanfic. So I really don't know what to say. Slow useless build that would pay off probably in next century or shounen on steroids that's doesn't give you time to enjoy it? I am not saying those works a bad, I like them both. But this feels like a torture. Pick you poison, comrades.
Great chapter as usual, But author you need to decide what story wants to be. There has been like only 17 chapters, so it's still just the start of things, and it has been top notch in all aspects, but in those chapters there have been 4 big events MC has been though. Betrayal and Escape from Krypton, Doomsday, Conquering Viltrumites and then their betrayal. It has been fast paced and thrilling, but i guess everyone Imagined it would have more wish fullfilment in it. I mean story description still says it would be Mass Harem. Is it the initial setup that'll change in future to more wishfullfilment according to your outline, or does the story has changed it's character over the 17 weeks, or do we always had wrong expectations from your story?