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Comments of chapter undefined of A New Start : Quick Transmigration

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coldfeet
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why is this written in third person. pls stop that.

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coldfeet
coldfeetLv13coldfeet

story is decent but midway threw you stop talking ahout the kids and its unclear what happens with her boss, its it a flashback or is it currently happening?

AmrutaShinde95:ha, I m just trying to see if I can do that so 😅

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Amit_badshra
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After all love is something that you can't plan in advance ❤️🖤💕

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AmrutaShinde95

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arwen_gala
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(´∀`)♡

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Unfolding_Truth
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Nice

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ikka
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you really need an editor!.. other then that an okay start.. a bit boring.. nothing that really makes it stand out..

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BtsMeenakshi
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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AmrutaShinde95
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See this! I just gifted the story: Potion