Comments of chapter undefined of Primordial Dimensions

This work is a failure. I say this not to discourage or disparage you, but un honest advice. I skipped to chapter 26 then continued to scroll down to here. Prior to that, I followed the first ten chapters. Where is the dialogue?

Currently the novel is doing single character development. Not interesting to some people, but until the character raises his foundation/"strength" he pretty much has no say in society/government. Though I get the feeling if he stuck around to meet his intended, he might be objecting as strongly.

😀 👍 👍 Thanks for the Work

I'm curious as to what is going on with his father's character and that part of the storyline too...will we get any hints..?

thx for the chapter😻

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thanks for the chapter