NakedApron
well, FKING WELL DONE AUTHOR, THIS IS ACTUALLY BETTER THAN THE OG STORY, the prologue is dang good, it is actually the revamped version of the og but, better and different? idk, since this is grimdark version of it, i expect mc to be a bit ruhless and has frequent action, or maybe u unintentionally might go to the slice of life grimdark version XD, anyway glad youre back,Aaaand im gonna grind these tickets now, nc prologue so far
I really like the concepts you've introduced so early on here instead of it being thrown at us in info dump style flashbacks lol. Also really good to see some proper planning and foreshadowing in place with some of the things mentioned. This is already feeling much more thoughtful, quality, and less messy than Shades, and I enjoyed that so good stuff 👍👍, really excited for this ^^