Comments of chapter undefined of Ascension of the Nephilim

very good and smooth start. that what we expect from our amazing author.

Love born on the battlefield... truely tragic...

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Very unique beggining to a novel. I like it

I'm really enjoying reading this novel keep it up man you're great

I am really enjoying the first chapter. Looking forward to reading the rest of them, thank you.

Thanks for the chapter. Quite amazing start

What a scene 🥹 so beautiful

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wonderful chapter

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that scene bothered me, where the Lady arrives and the guy explains his reasoning. I don't like it. I hope I'm not being rude, but I felt like it could've been better. I just don't feel like it's right, cause in my head, I see a Warrior fighting for hours, probably soaked in blood. Then some lady comes out of nowhere, pleading for the man's surrender. Yet the guy sadly explains he's cursed by some necro guys cause he's stand over a bunch of corpses that contain one important dude from those necro guys. And he doesn't want that, cause that's just nasty, playing with a corpse. Right, what I didn't like about this chapter, now that I'm going through that scene, is that it contains too much dialogue, and too few emotions!! It's that quote I heard somewhere about a good story being shown, not told...? I'd that how it goes? don't tell me a story, show it to me? Yeah, I felt like there should've been some more context behind their dialogue, I think it felt rushed. yep. Am I looking too deep into this? sheesh.

awesome. brilliant work. i just love it

Camping the afterlife ouch.

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thanks for the chapter! 😁😃 --interesting start. 😃

I like to start I mean it was predictable but well written

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