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Comments of chapter undefined of Return of the Woodcutter

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Vorez
VorezLv13Vorez

Did you choose 'have a taste of death' because the situation is more serious than just a normal 'have a taste of my iron'? Other than that question, i gotta say this, i like the way you write the battle. Some authors give too much information with all the sound effects and stuff, which just distracts the reader. Your style is a good mix, not too much information so the readers can still imagine the situation. Great work man 👍 Keep it up !!!

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DRpotato312
DRpotato312Lv15DRpotato312

I have to say, The whole exert from the Yggdrasil chronicles is some of my favorite lore building ive come across. It reminds me of little tidbits youd see on video game loadinf screens

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GrumpyGuy
GrumpyGuyLv5GrumpyGuy

My senses were tingling about the “superhero landing”, nice play with the cliche further ahead.

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CrazyPomeranian
CrazyPomeranianLv12CrazyPomeranian

First

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Braccer
BraccerLv5Braccer

The note at the end was half a spoiler... would have been funny to see there point of view running to help him. Chilling on a mountain of corpses with a cold brew.

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Rob_Brown_5585
Rob_Brown_5585Lv14Rob_Brown_5585

Okay I gotta ask having read through and now googling.. All the extracts, the only thing I can find is a board game. Have you seriously managed to write an Intresting and captivating novel off a board game! Please please do a horror for hungry hippos or mouse trap next if this is the case!

skeleton_key
skeleton_keyLv15skeleton_key

Thanks for the chapter đŸȘ“

Mr_Shang
Mr_ShangLv13Mr_Shang

thanks for the chapter!

Benrex777
Benrex777Lv4Benrex777

I have a question. Didn't you imply that what Aito did only works if he heals himself afterwards? And we heard about his body being torn apart by mana. And afterwards he hit the ground pretty hard a few times. What is the state of his body and why does it seem like he is pretty healthy? Shouldn't he have used a healing bead or something?