YoanRoturier
Did you choose 'have a taste of death' because the situation is more serious than just a normal 'have a taste of my iron'? Other than that question, i gotta say this, i like the way you write the battle. Some authors give too much information with all the sound effects and stuff, which just distracts the reader. Your style is a good mix, not too much information so the readers can still imagine the situation. Great work man đ Keep it up !!!
I have a question. Didn't you imply that what Aito did only works if he heals himself afterwards? And we heard about his body being torn apart by mana. And afterwards he hit the ground pretty hard a few times. What is the state of his body and why does it seem like he is pretty healthy? Shouldn't he have used a healing bead or something?