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Comments of chapter undefined of Return of the Woodcutter

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Intil_O
Intil_OLv2Intil_O

U should use the concept of them evolving to be caveman at the end

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Nancy_Jim
Nancy_JimLv13Nancy_Jim

Huh these two about to make my eyes teary. Too cute

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Austrel001
Austrel001Lv3Austrel001

oh my, i am too much in love with your story. thank you yo weite something so refreshing and full of feeling💖

Sara_Wilcox
Sara_WilcoxLv14Sara_Wilcox

I hope Jack gets to leave with himđŸ„ș

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DanteDiablos
DanteDiablosLv5DanteDiablos

He really needs to stop being stupid and go explore the depths of that cave.

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Meanesx
MeanesxLv4Meanesx

👍

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RavensDarckness
RavensDarcknessLv4RavensDarckness

thanks đŸ˜đŸ€€đŸ€€á“šá˜á—ą

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zoka_kola
zoka_kolaLv12zoka_kola

man your story just hit different it gives you an enjoyable time reading it keep up the good work

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Ouroboros001
Ouroboros001Lv11Ouroboros001

Honestly, it's pretty good so far. I don't think you need to add much more. If you ever go back to these to re-read through your story and reground yourself into it, then ask I would recommend doing is smoothing it out a little. Small additions to make sure the prose is how you want it. Though, it's pretty decent of course there's room for improvement.

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ReverseLife
ReverseLifeLv11ReverseLife

Really nice 👍🏿 đŸ‘đŸŸ

Idiot_That_Reads
Idiot_That_ReadsLv3Idiot_That_Reads

thanks

Snoodle_Booper
Snoodle_BooperLv4Snoodle_Booper

Will he allow himself to forget though? To remain in ignorance of his actions rather than redeem them

skeleton_key
skeleton_keyLv15skeleton_key

Thanks for the chapter đŸȘ“

baniel_stone
baniel_stoneLv4baniel_stone

mc needs sleep kill the being in the cave makes sense to me

Mr_Shang
Mr_ShangLv13Mr_Shang

yomi kurone