Comments of chapter undefined of DC: The Male Amazon

Fucking hell this is a seriously retarded mc, i know the author is trying to make him cool and edgy but its just not working for me and the bit about nyx talking about feeling sorry and all that bullshit, 5000 years he endured what you basically described as torture and conveniently now she feels sorry and wants to help him? This book isn't for me

The jl would not attack like that they have been known to deescalite sitautions in comics and shows. batman would have probably provoked him to see if he is really psychotic. they would not have imprisoned him for no reason. superman would have tried to talk it out whihc usually causes trouble for himself as villians take advantage of that. diana should be more upset that her brother was kept in concious sleep for 5000 years not caring about imprisoning him. At most the jl can say they want to check his mental health and give him resources to live in the modern world. A spare property with ID. I really like the premise of this story but its turning into just character bashing for no reason.

I really liked the premise of the story, but ... I'm not understanding this development and I'm not talking about the protagonist. He was imprisoned for many years without direct contact with anyone, so it is natural for him to be a little unstable initially. What I don't understand is why the Justice League is interacting with him in this aggressive way even if the victim is him ...

So MC admitted that Superman was stronger than him before the fight even began. That means he wished to be weaker than him when he made his wishes. He knew he would be weaker than Superman if he made those wishes, and yet he still made them because they seemed cool. And what's with putting the gun to his head?? What is this shit? He could threatened green arrow's life and others would back off. He would rather kill himself?? This novel is just not for me. This MC is just too childish.

I'm not liking this fanfic man, the mc is way too calm for a guy that got locked up for 5k years, it seems author needs to put more work in mc showing emotion

well we have a another failed attempt at trying to make a tragic mc.Never did get the appeal of having a tragic mc? Do you enjoy imagining those kind of situations ? Tragic doesnt equate to edgy or one of a kind.Tragic is just well tragic.

I suggest you revamp the whole story from scratch mr author, you can do a lot better than this I know it

I hope he won’t Just forgive nyx,even though she did help him,and didn’t want to put that spell on him,she still did it and if i was in that situation i wouldn’t like her all that much

nyx did nothing to help him but he likes her, this is just to force a romance but it sucks, not to mention this business of talking to others instead of running away, he controls the shadows can get in and out

Yeah your mc is a idiot aint for me.

trash mc I am out lol author just needed a reason to make his ret@rded mc edgy

nyx was the one who put the spells on him, not to mention that she’s an old pedophile who wants to marry babies, it doesn’t make any sense, crappy romance

dude really, does this guy have no self confidence that he already believes that superman can and will beat him?

this is so boring

Idk why yall hating the mc so much? I mean it makes sense dude was basically mentally tortured for 5000 years. I'd be surprised if he came out normal.

This chapter was fire

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Why all this useless build-up if he can't even taken down at least 2 of them.

I'm liking the story so far, keep it up author Good Job!