Elyon
Not sure if you already have the story mapped out or not, but if you dont mind me asking, how long would you like this story to be? I know some authors who end up rushing their stories because they dont want to make the story last for too many chapters. Feel free to also let me know that im asking for too much
I like the last few paragraphs and I am glad to hear you won't entertain the questions that can spoil. I did ask about the magic but only in a sense that I wasn't sure how much time had passed and what was left on the seal. Great chapter I was very stressed until the end and I just stopped shaking half way through my comment.