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Patrick_Johnso2mthCommentedCh 178 Chapter177-Leviathan's Divine Realm (2nd update, Cheer me with Power Stones!)- Patrick_Johnso2mthCommentedCh 172 Chapter171-The Power of Shadowflame (2nd update, Cheer me with Power Stones!)
- Patrick_Johnso2mthCommentedCh 167 Chapter166-Return to Dawn Breeze Auction House (3rd update, Cheer me with Power Stones!)
- Patrick_Johnso2mthCommentedCh 166 Chapter165-Dissuasion and Testing (2nd update, Cheer me with Power Stones!)
- Patrick_Johnso2mthCommentedCh 110 Chapter109-Werewolf Ancient Village, Side Quest（2nd update, Cheer me with Power Stones!）
- Patrick_Johnso7mthCommented
I want the gacha pulls
"I'll ask you again," Max said with a serious expression on his face. "You want a random High-Tier Skill as your freebie, correct?" - Patrick_Johnso7mthCommentedCh 240 Ascending
- Patrick_Johnso7mthCommented
death plague tremor and blizzard are all pretty similar as aoe attacks but while death plague is good for warfare the others will have a lesser effect as he goes up in tier. what I look forward to is learning more about the blood shaman class
Ch 238 Tier 3 promotion - Complete! - Patrick_Johnso8mthCommentedCh 173 Space wars!
- Patrick_Johnso8mthCommentedCh 1948 The Weaving of a Bloody War! II
- Patrick_Johnso8mthCommentedCh 166 A protected room
- Patrick_Johnso9mthCommentedCh 1932 Panacea, Astonishing Results! II
- Patrick_Johnso9mthCommentedCh 1926 Apollyon! II
- Patrick_Johnso9mthCommentedCh 1920 The Absolute Kainos Dream Dungeon Blooms! II
- Patrick_Johnso9mthCommentedCh 1911 Glorious Natural Laws!
- Patrick_Johnso10mthPosted
my biggest complaint by chapter 125 has to be the exposition is endless. I find myself skimming through pages of text just to get to the next thing that actually effects anyone and isn't just more commands for how people should move or about how "this thing happened but it didn't effect our rich smart prepared MC"... I'd like to ask for a comment on if this gets better but I saw another review saying by ch 1000 they are on quest 4 so I doubt it. There are some parts of the fights that are great don't get me wrong there is just so much that could be left out and it would feel like a more captivating scene rather than less or incomplete. We can get into how the only way I can remember some of the love interests is by their exclusive powers and if they don't have those they seem easily as forgettable as anyone else. My suggestion would be if you have important characters have them stand out from the crowd a bit more not just by being a group leader or famous or from a memory orb but by doing anything at all honestly(like the hot tempered girl who fought with the mc and had a dramatic entrance overall was great but then the MC leaves so fast I just forgot her.) This format of writing would probably be fine if you simply don't try to write a romance. I might come back to read another hundred chapters to make sure I have it a fair chance if I see a comment about it but for now I've had enough.
- Patrick_Johnso10mthReplied to J4YBOCh 3 A fated encounter