If comedy is a main theme in this I'm going to drop it, I haven't read a single novel with a comedy focus that was good, they are always cringey and unfunny.
The premise of the story is interesting but it doesn’t have to have “comedy” in every chapter. So far it’s been too heavy on the comedy for me. Hopefully it mellows out a little and focuses on some other things instead of trying to be cheesy-funny every chapter.