Will there be an explanation how he donated (I assume he did), his heart? Technically that is considered murder (by the doctors?), so unless he had some reason allowing him to do so or its some weird parallel world (ie not Earth).
well from what we know so far, he is a orphan and has been in the hospital for a long time, so either he has some terminal condition that left his heart ok, but his body dieing. Then I could see why the doctor would maybe willing to do the surgery.
good chapter, but i saw quite a number of unnecessary capitalisations. you should edit them out so keep the flow. (or don't mind, i am just too nitpicky about small details)
Ahem, this is fiction, in reality there is Only one GOD, and no there are not other billion planets with life on them, that have other GODs as well, and no our, believe all together doesn't create a God, cause ours already existed before time and was the one that created us. Understood đ
I guess there is a low chance of the author reading this at this point but: The word «god» is only capitalized in monotheistic religions such as Christianity where it also serves as a name. In polytheistic religions, you do not capitalize it.
i think you should speak less about this matter of god or gods or whatever because everyone has his beliefs and maybe with this kind of writing he will feel offended
that one true god explation with many planets doesnt make sense, if two world believe in a god that created everything doesnt that make one god with different names?