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Comments of chapter undefined of My World Traveling System: The Harbinger of Death

Lord_Anthony
Lord_AnthonyLv14Lord_Anthony

So you build up this demon king, and all the heroes in the story yet Haven't met the main character but then you throw aliens out of nowhere in this story. I get you are into space but come on, man, you need to let this story breathe a little. Try not to go too many eggs in the basket.

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sleepy_Spartan
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You have my attention. Thanks

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Fut_Med
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thanks for the chapter

_Felix_
_Felix_Lv13_Felix_

Frank never gets a break.......kill them all and refine them instead.

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Polar_Tempest
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Thx for the Chap!!!

Kenneth_Mceuen_0675
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Thanks for the chapter.