The_Celestial_King
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interesting... a good start
Agreed. It's definitely a unique story.
For a while I expected him to be still inside the womb
So far grammar and spelling is my only complaint but thats about it
Good start. You've got me hooked
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See this! I just gifted the story: Potion
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
Soory but this is bad written. (Not the story development)
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