MotivatedSloth
The first chapter felt kinda cringe. I mean to say that I felt like I was reading a monologue instead of a dialogue. Especially with how the Mc was talking like some highschooler reading his speech to everyone at graduation in a hollywood musical. I think the main reason is that the repetitive emphasis on his comrades (friends, brothers, students, etc.) without mentioning anything about them but some single-word speeches from them. In conclusion, first chapters are hardest to write in any story. I think the dialogue needs rewriting. Although I wasn't hooked, I'm not one to judge by the first chapter only. Especially for novels.
Man, I wrote this novel LOOOOONG time ago. If you want to read something with a similar concept (although different world) go to my other profile (theOGSloth) and you will find "Hero System: Mage's Survival in the Cultivation World" there. The idea of clashing magic with cultivation is the same but written with someone 2 years of writing experience ahead :D
let's be honest our MC is a drama king, I mean destroying a world just for being cheated on? Talk about overreacting, the wife cheats, you let her go it's not like you are going to die from such a thing, what he did was really drastic, I stopped being a fan of his but aight I'mma keep reading just to see what he'll do in the future, if he overreacts like this again I'mma drop the novel.