evilmunky45
Wow! Okay so your writing has improved dramatically since the first chapter or even the prologue. Like the format is really good, so much improvement on this chapter. And the grammar has been good! It is very descriptive. It's a lot of reading, but I like that a lot, I can really see it all happening in my imagination. There's a few mistakes sprinkled here and there but you write a lot so am guessing it is bound to happen. Ta'ro seems to have found conviction! This hasn't been updated in so long though. Author will you be writing more?