ArkAnghel
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umm too much name, need a lot of pronouns here to make it better
Why is the discription of the novel is different than the content of it. Please add vrmmo tag. The synopsis implies apocalypse theme and real world system.
ok. that's it. dropping
To much repetition. Almost Every line begins with and then. I hope it gets Better with more chapters. The Story has Potential
Really Hard to read. And then and then and then and then
yep definitely a chinese cliche hopes it won't get more dramatic
