GOD_OF_ENAS
Author liked the comment.
ok its a good start of the story but you really need an editor or use a grammar program to help. it is hard to read some of it.
It's a fanfiction novel man I think if you want good grammar... A literary novel is a good choice
+++++++++++++++
Eso fue cruel y sadico muy buen castigo
thanks for the chapter author đđđđ
Thanks for the chapter
more
