translation is good, but the novel itself sounds like a default xianxia brain dead novel where enemies are just dumb and come out endlessly one after the other. none of the things that happened in his 7 years of school life would happen in real HP world lol, purebloods have so much political consideration and pride to even openly attack someone like that and Dumbledore is not that dumb to just stand by and let it happen out in the open. It directly challenges his rule and authority, and literally slaps all the teachers' face.