These bastards always stop at the good parts why ? Why would you do that to me? Oh this is me being dramatic. I know no one cares but still i have been cut before i could fully enjoy.
Tsk. Aren't magic beasts usually much stronger than humans of the same rank/level? Why does this say that the 4th rank wolves were as strong as rank 3 warriors?
Glad this was on the Free Read today. I wasn't going to read it, but then did because I wanted to go cheap today!
The editing needs work. Lots of work. Incorrect gender pronouns bug me.