Comments of chapter undefined of The Duke's Passion

read the prologue.......and now I'm dying to read further. It's so intriguing. Dear author plz upload more n more chapters

like the story

Please don't take my comments the wrong way! I hope I provided some constructive criticisms. I had more but didn't want to muddy up your work with too many comments. A few more notes: The tense flip flops and makes it a little confusing. There are a few grammar mistakes and an overuse of commas. I wouldn't mind working with you! We could polish it together and I could help you figure out what's missing (hopefully!). Let me know <3

I Love this so much

thrilling and captivating prologue! I'm hooked!!!😍😍😍

gosh I wish this was a comic! it would be nice to see everything.

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I was taken aback by the last line. How sudden!

This is very well written author, I was hooked from the very first line <3

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This prologue is very nicely written. I'm interested to read more of the story.

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Very captivating✅✅

Thrilling and captivating i really love it

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Can you please read my stories im sure you gonna like it so try and give me your opinion