LadyStoic
An avid consumer of all things yaoi, isekai, and romance. Looking for original works to proofread in my spare time. If you're interested, please contact me on Discord (Ladystoic#4482).
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The ending was a little confusing. I wasn’t sure what happened until I read the author’s note. You have a unique writing style that I love and I don’t wish to change it but maybe emphasize how she wasn’t paying attention to how far she backed up? Or some imagery of the pond nearby?
Did you mean from the kingdom of diamonds?
I like the imagery of this
Oooo I really like the structure of this sentence!! (I'm weird, ik)
Maybe he meant in a sexy way rather than a literally-eat-you kind if way?
Did you give up on this paragraph?
"find a baby boy" sounds weird here.
There are two spots where you have "her". Are they gender fluid or is this a typo?
I think you mean "earned him around", you have "her" here.
He has a stripper family now
Oh jeez, that sounds awful