Comments of chapter undefined of Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

Can you make the story more entertaining. It's getting boring

Thank you. Need more story line in here. He has some awesome gifts that need to be used.

Are you going to change the pace a bit? If it’s going to stay like this it would take hundreds of chapters before we finish the Hogwarts 'arc' and anything really non-cannon can happen. And I can’t imagine any romance until his 4-5 year in Hogwarts, and again that would take a lot of time. And the main-Problem for me is that it would get boring and repetitive really fast if most of the chapters cover the same everyday life with no real major events. Sorry for the rant but if the pace isn’t going to change even a little bit, I can’ find myself continuing this novel, even tho it’s well written.

Don't worry about the Chapters, as long they will eventually come, It is great. Thanks for the Chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

nice chapter

Thanks for chapter :) Don't have anything to write about chapter so i write a thought that i had ... I watched new fantastic beasts and i had a thought that grindelwald is somehow similar to mubong from god of highschool ...

Tha ks for the chapter :) Picture of Nyx anywhere? :)

Gracias por el capitulo

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

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thank you for chapter :)

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Thanks for the chapter.

thanks for the chapter loved it

thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍