Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Dumbledore be like :

Dumbledore rn:

Kill him too

MC - Wrathful - Want a sour candy? I give you the hufflepuff's cup

Why didn't Quinn just use the solution of this chapter and didn't out himself to the family? As it happened now it for sure build character but seams kinda unnecessary

Nice

Okayyyy... I guess.. I mean Dumbledore is way more crafty than to just give up like that.. but this is fine.

Awesome as always. One power stone coming right up..

It feels like the last two chapters were out of order. He also sounds a bit drunk? Which would be understandable but still kind of detracts from the seriousness of the moment. The pauses and misspelled words look more like slurred responses than mistakes which changes the scene in a way I don't think is intended but still works. Overall a good 7/10 because of the order of delivery would be a 8 or 9 /10 if this was how it was handled initially rather than running away from home and being all edgy for a couple of chapters after being slapped by Dumbledore across his face.

Thanks for the chapter

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Ok, I didn't understand the last part either Dumblebore, don't worry

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

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