Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

I really want to like this series. It's why I've stuck with it this long... but these arcs have been just stupid choice after stupid choice. I just... I want to like it but I just find it hard to care anymore. It seemed like this arc was finally going in a good direction again then it just blindsided us with stupidity again after such a fantastic reveal. He's running away from home like a child? During a war? It's just so... disappointing.

Feels like a avalanche of stupid choices, if his grandfather really did care for Quinn, he would assume that Quinn was doing it for the protection and safety of his friends and girlfriends. Going behind his back, blocking him, withdrawing funds to run away with seems something a thief would do. George is smart enough to know that the problem of Voldemort could affect him if he or his daughter are out without sufficient preparations. Having his grandson dress up as a third rate vigilante and roughing bad guys up like some trash batman should illicit some sort of verbal discipline and nothing that should heavily restrict Quinn. This story is really a sinking ship, you've forced so much stupidity on the main character.

honestly ever since I found this story I have enjoyed I quite a bit and even praised It a lot but what is the author doing with this arc has quinns character development been flung out of the window cause the quinn west I know whould never be be as emotional as he is now, he certainly would never run away and he also is not as stupid as he has been for these past chapters

Thanks for the Chapter!👍👍👍👍👍 You know this is the first time I been disappointed in your story. Even when you went the Two women relationship route I was sad, but I wasn’t really disappointed. There is so much dirt on Dumbledore that he can use, and instead of doing that you made Quinn panic and wrote for him to run away. Right you just throw all the development that he had into the trash.

Are you seriously telling me that Dumbledore will visit George West on his wife death anniversary to blackmail him with secret related to safety of his grandson and rest of his family? Is he there to get forced ally or new enemy?

Story did spiral down from hunting to escaping.🤔🤔 Could have made a better choice like warning Dumbledore that he would be making an enemy and revealing his secrets like how he revealed the prophecy to Voldemort through snape and how he let the incidents in Hogwarts happen as they had happened. Well overall could have done better as it was a letdown and escaping is not in MC's character.🤷‍♂️🤷‍♂️

dude youre spoiling the story by adding these unnecessary arcs. if you dont have more material just end the fanfic already no need to drag it along by adding idiotic nonsensical things to the story. the mc is becoming more and more unlikeable.

all that training and power and supposed intelligence and it's dumb choices everytime -.- mentally he's already like 40, why is he panicking so much?

Kinda becoming tiresome to read this. Prior to the sin arc this was really an enjoyable read, but since then the mc has made stupid mistake after stupid mistake. Really hope he sits down and actually thinks about his actions before running blindly without a plan.

butterfly effect of letting dumbledore live

Thanks for the Chapter

Thanks for the chapter, it's fair to use some chapters for this topic. It's a big decision and something that is pretty relevant to the story

thx for the chapter

I don't see author replying to any of the readers complaint. it's a fan fic and he is enjoying this controversial attention he is getting. after his last fight with voldy I stopped reading in the hopes he will put everything back together but now I am very disappointed. so author good luck on getting attention but after these stunts u have pulled I will forever check if the novel is written by you I will keep it a distance away.

Author can you make an alternate version of this story where mc is evil with no morals.

Thanks for the chapter

quinn needs to up some big brain plan

thanks for the chapter and dont listen to the haters. they have always been the loudest while we will quietly support you.

Thanks for the chapter