Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Seem to be draging to past 10+ chapters out with just filler and a little side character info. Been making basically 0 progress with anything just having it all circle round to where he started.

There are a lot of readers complaining that the pace of this arc is slow, but actually everyone just wants to get rid of Umbridge as quickly as possible and they don't want to admit it! Lol Thanks for the chapter! machine translated

This arc feels a bit slower than the rest btw i am still salty about the fact that quinn didn't find a catacomb in italy

harry potta with family and sister snap like canon? just PATHETIC

anyone feeling this arc is a bit slow compared to previous ones anyway good chapter😄

Esto se esta arrastrando mucho ya...

You know, I've actually used my brain for once and came to a conclusion that this fic is really not that good than I thought. Ignorance truly is bliss.

The title "Petty Ban" was good pun/foreshadowing of Umbridge disliking Potter's talk of Pettigrew.

btw some sentences are broken up into separate lines halfway through

So she even has the power to ban him for making a reasonable statement of worry due to a proven threat to his life? And no one can undo such a blatantly petty and undeserved ban?

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Very slow paced if not boring by now

Thanks

🖤🖤🖤

Thx for the chapter

Keep up the good work.

Nice👍

Thanks for the chapter

my hope and theory is that umbridge touches someone she shouldn't and quinn kills her like a dog/frog :) happy end

That chapter Was a bit Shoddy. But I thank You for the chapter