Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

The girls difficulty had increased. May the games be bloody... I mean, entertaining.

The race for Quinn affection is on fire right now huh?? Who will be the winner? 1 of them? 2 of them? or will all of them get the grand prize.

personally I dislike quiditch. Its a stupid game with too many faults. So, I will likely find these next few chapters about it incredibly dull. Try to keep the quiditch tournament short... there is still a vault he needs to solve. Would much rather get back to him solving the vaults, getting stronger, and improving than see him put on a quiditch tournament. Thats just my opinion though, I will still support the novel regardless of what you actually do. I might just...skim... the quiditch chapters though... I really don't like that sport...

Quinn - Special effects guy - It's his thing

The Tri-witch competition for Quinns heart is on! now all girls are on first name basis with him, but who will be tje lucky girl(s?) that will recieve the West surname? Ivy knows a lot of his secrets and is indebted to him, Daphne and Astoria as well and they went to his home and saw his personal space, while Fleur knows him the shortest she knows what she wants ans openly flirts with him, they all started on different positions but who knows who will end up in the altar!?

If it's going more than 1 girl route, I will be dropping. I had a good time here so far, thanks for that but I will not be part of this anymore. Bye.

Fantastic chapter! Can't wait for more! Also I'm thinking 3 is the golden number(Daphne, Ivy, Fleur)!

Can't wait for the cheating team!

Luna or/And Astoria

Another smitten girl haha😍😍 but the boy is crazy about magic nothing else. Oh my poor veela

We can see greengrass drooling and Fluer flirting in one chapter... that is the indication of something amazing. .

Love this story, always got me wanting to read another chapter

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

My God, This book leave me craving for the next chapter every time! Thanks for this masterpiece!

I GIVE U ALL MY STONES, MAKE ME POOR, DO MORE OF THIS CHAPTHERS AND FULL FILED MY DESIRES. pls :)

thank you po author