Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

When the Author uses big words and technical theories

ok i understand that the author wants to be thorough but these magic theories are have started to bore me now

This novel had great potential but nowadays it feels like a 18th century crazy alchemist's journal with some life events mixed in between .What was even the point you were trying to make with the previous filler chapter?Tell me the problem are you running out of ideas to proceed with the story ?This whole arc is becoming so boring mate.

The chapter was nice. But I just want to say that after the the first volume. The release of chapters has been uneven. I hope you release them consistently.

Lol

Since Dumbledore is friends with the mermen will they tell him about how the kraken is being all weird and fighting a student?

Author the chapters are geting boring i am holding my self from droping the fan fic in the hope author can rescusce this fan fic

thank you for the chapter And yess More chapters ples

I really like these magic theories, although people say they are boring, they make me feel that Harry Potter is more than green rays. Your world is more interesting and mysterious, but still logical

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

I Loved the chapter! thanks, and im excited for the next ones

Amanzing. Best of Hp fanfic. I ser your dedication [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

wont even be a competition during the 2nd trial of the Cup XD

Is it me or is the Kraken the true mascot of Hogwarts?!

Thanks again for another awesome chapter and great as always i love the story please keep it up and stay healthy

Thanks for the great chapter! Can't wait to see what he gets from the vault!

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Thanks for the chapter

Another skimmed chapter..