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Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

HorizonCrown
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good

Helios_Sol
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what's the point of taking his memories

ChikenTortoise
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everytime i see the word buttler, i read it as combat buttler...

VoidUzumaki
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hope mc doesnt start caring about his new family.

Thutmose
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What does his grandfather look like besides a middle aged man. You don’t really describe that. Don’t get me wrong the story doest interest me. I still would like a clear image to imagine, ya know. If this is done later then ignore this and continue on. Good luck with trying to write this on the fly, word of advice go slow and take note of what you’ve written before hand so not too many plot holes show up down the line.

Chaddts
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You have 2 men you rip both souls out and stuff them each other bodies. While erasing the memories of those people the soups came from but allowing access to the bodies memories...what have you accomplished???? NOTHING. MEMORIES MAKE THE MAN. when you only have 1 set of memories that is who you are. This isn't a transmigration/reincarnation etc novel at all. MEMORIES MAKE THE MAN. without them the soul is blank and isn't who it was. Dropped this for false tagging.

Schlat
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can someone tell who will be his love interest? i hope its luna lovegood

DaoistWhatever
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So he doesn't remember his own name but remember the whole HP series?

Quidanstealsnovels
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As much as I like this fic the vaults things are dragging out now. I don't really care about them or how he gets into them. Id rather more characters interactions. It sounds like he barely talks to people even know I know its not true.

Daoist6HTpq0
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After 330 something chapters this becomes a harem ,just a small warning ,as there is no harem tag

America_Yea
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Have you ever have ->Have you ever had

naughty_boi
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Based off the responses the op gives they sound like someone in their edgy emo phase.

Kaden_Tw
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Hi, could you give me permission to translate your story into Spanish on Wattpad? I liked your story and I would like to translate it only if you allow me

Isykik
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I like it it's a Great idea

AvidReader962
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Enjoyable opening chapter, curious to see where the story goes. Also, curious if he took over the body or if he simply reincarnated and the magic and shock activated his memories?

Magical_Cupcake
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Magical_Cupcake
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Izu3
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Thank you! This fanfic looks promising

Dagom
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Where is the protagonist's hacker? onde está o hacker do protagonista?

Max_Kaster
Max_KasterLv11Max_Kaster

Ich frage mich wann Batman erscheint oder Lucky Luke um die Daltons festzunehmen.

Cayse_Matocinos
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I wanna read more novel