FictionOnlyReader
What does his grandfather look like besides a middle aged man. You don’t really describe that. Don’t get me wrong the story doest interest me. I still would like a clear image to imagine, ya know. If this is done later then ignore this and continue on. Good luck with trying to write this on the fly, word of advice go slow and take note of what you’ve written before hand so not too many plot holes show up down the line.
You have 2 men you rip both souls out and stuff them each other bodies. While erasing the memories of those people the soups came from but allowing access to the bodies memories...what have you accomplished???? NOTHING. MEMORIES MAKE THE MAN. when you only have 1 set of memories that is who you are. This isn't a transmigration/reincarnation etc novel at all. MEMORIES MAKE THE MAN. without them the soul is blank and isn't who it was. Dropped this for false tagging.