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Comments of chapter undefined of The Hunter That Returned From Hell

qoronk
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Schobax
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I just want to voice my opinion here (and express some immersion-issues) pls don't be offended. 1. Daggers are stabbing weapons. Especially against something like a wolf that has a pelt, one wont get anywhere with shallow cuts from daggers. Dual wielding daggers is cool and all...but with swords you get the same weapon with more advantages like more range, its easier to block attacks and its easier to generate more strength at the fast moving tip of the sword. 2. Reach is everything. Especially a human trying to survive IN HELL wouldn't want any monster to get even close to him/her. So spear or staff would be the way to go...with having daggers as emergency weapons or in close range situations. I personally would have all kinds of weapons on me as long as they wont weigh me down. Especially some ranged weapon to whittle my opponents dow before they can reach me would be useful. 3. The reunion with the family went to easy and too fast. They probably already decleared him dead and he should go to the police station first before doing anything. Also the mother definitely wouldn't let mc go to a 50% death dungeon after just reuniting with him the other day. 4. Cutting a beard is easily possible with a stone....not to mention daggers he presumably used in hell... Anyway, I like the story, but I don't think it is well enoigh thought through.

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VanshRaj
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thanks for the chapter

TheUnderLord
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I am dropping annoying sister bs and cliche i will fight level 50 hunter uncle has not been crazy for 400 year cause family spelling and not choosing hard or easy like come on what is the point of 400 years

AllPorpuse
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I like the novel but I already have enough of this cliche. MC gets op then back to square one, it's like you rob all his hard work during those 400 years.

Kimxzi
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Sonmin
SonminLv11Sonmin

so many grammar mistakes .

DaoistGjqKbq
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I really enjoy reading it! Keep going!

hurp_aderp
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a good story idea but the english translation of it leaves much to be desired expecially for the combat. something like combat shouldn't be simple like "side steps, (for the 3rd time mind you so reused phrases) jumps on back and stabs skull hard" it would immerse readers more with something like "As the Dire Wolf lunged at him, it suddenly extended a paw out to swipe at his 3rd attempt to side step narrowly missing. However, that miss would be the fatal opening needed as the wolf landed, stumbling from the awkward landing, opening the nape of it's neck for a dagger's blade to pierce. With reflexes trained for these moments for 400 years, he swiftly pounced and this time landed on it's back stabbing the wolf's head. Easily inserting the broken daggers into the brain through the base of the skull, he finishing the fast-paced battle with the final devastating counter attack" -CRITICAL KILL- at least that's my thoughts on what would sound cooler or more immersive i probably made mistakes or could have done better too

Banjohamster
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DeathLingers
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hmm so it's hard to tell if he has all his strength or he's purposely playing around since his strength should have made him kill it in a second

John_Jane
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Moh_Kahar
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Pak_Regar_8154
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Dian_Purnamasari_3602
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DreadSnoop
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hope the hp stuff is just a reference cause in my opinion its lame you cut a neck and just crit and need to cut the neck 30 more times to achieve the hp for the monster or human to die... Aaaaaand hope mc is not a loner and build q group or a guild or something

Wan_Abud
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This novel look promising

Charlie_Wren
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Go go power rangers