Comments of chapter undefined of Outlandish impulse

It is a literary work of poetic and slightly heavy reading, there are too many names to memorize them all, but it is still a good start, maybe you should improve a little the specification of the characters beyond their ages, such as physique, hair color, eyes, etc, although I can not say much more because it was a prologue and I'm more used to reading fantasy XD, I felt at some point like I was reading hamlet at some point XD ....

I loved the poem... Poems aren't really my cup of tea, once in a while I'll write something rhyme-y but they're not as beautiful and as poetic, for a lack of a better word, as this. I'm quite impressed. As soon as I'm discharged from the hospital I'll read this in its entirety. Until then keep up the good work!

The poetic start was awesome..

Very unique writing style. Interested to read more.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

So deep...

A very unique start

This is just a prologue but I have to admit I'm hooked. Really unique.

Too much name to remember for the first chapter, a bit of editing but not recognizable enough to affect te story... Hands up to the science stuff, and to the interesting start to get fellas hooked and jumping for more!

This is a really cool consept!

I just read it twice to make myself understand the plot.This is called someone who thinks OUT OF THE BOX. Great thinking and it makes your work unique with those poetic lines. Good work.