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Comments of chapter undefined of Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

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Roaring_Snake
Roaring_SnakeLv15Roaring_Snake

I feel like there has been enough chapters setting up the stage. This one is just overkill. We don't really need to see what there were doing waiting for him if it's just to inform them of the plan. For us readers, this plan had already been discussed and settled. So we would just assume that Shu Yao informed them before bringing them over (and that would be the logical thing to do). Regarding their reaction to having a Domain Lord on their side, we already got a glimpse of that from Shu Yao and Fend Chen. All in all, we haven't learned anything new from this chapter (not even the names of those elders), not does it bring anything of value to the story.

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Kubera
KuberaLv6Kubera

Kind of feels like filler, in my honest opinion you could have used 1/4 of a chapter and achieve same effect.

Sidis
SidisLv15Sidis

nice chapter

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Frsot12
Frsot12Lv4Frsot12

Thanks❤👍

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Landlord_0651
Landlord_0651Lv4Landlord_0651

Ty

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Nightshade102
Nightshade102Lv11Nightshade102

felt rather short......

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EnablingBarley
EnablingBarleyLv13EnablingBarley

Thanks for the Chapter, its fine ^_^, however you could have made this and the last 1 chapter with the POV change you normally use. But still its fine in my opinion.