PurpleSpring
it is good, take your time with it it goes at a nice slow pace fitting for the content of the novel, I personally like how you try to host as many monolouges between characters, it is much easier to build a basic character through this, but if you want to make one of the main characters then you need to add some arguments or something later on and have them resolve it, however this is just personally thinking in any case i would like to see how things go from here... good luck in your endeavors!!!