Comments of chapter undefined of The Auguste (Indefinite Hiatus)

dude, again? As an author of 10 years with no finished books, I understand your struggle. But as a reader I have to say that your books have not been that bad. The problem I see in your work is that you make your characters too OP too easily and quickly. One tip that I've found helps is to figure out the end before you figure out the beginning. Then you know where you wanna go, and once you know that you just gotta figure out how you want the character to get there and what lesson(s) you want to teach by that journey. What will the character learn, what will your readers learn from that? How long will it take for them to get to that desired end? Trust me, everything I've worked on since I learned that has been a lot better even though my ADHD makes it almost impossible to finish the books. I'm still planning one book and it's going to be pretty good when I actually work on it.

Love ya' man, hope once you get every thing sorted out, you can continue this, or maybe remake it, again, love you and the writing.

That sucks I really enjoyed the novel up to now but when it comes down to it reality comes fast and sometimes things have more priority

I haven't read any of this novel. Just here to check on you.

sadness

Can someone give me link to the new daWn that the author is talking about, i cant seem to find it