Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and Grindelwald's Heir
Harry Potter and Grindelwald's Heir
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Another interesting rewrite, you added the reason why Georg hates muggles, something that is appreciated in the formation of the character, but that has generated doubts for me the first one is how old is Georg? Because I think he is 7, and in my opinion I think it would be better if the isolation would start earlier so that the resentment would be deeper, although this can be enlarged with Grindelwald's upbringing. The second doubt is did you decide to change Georg's personality to make him less dark? The doubt arises because in the first writing he seems to me a more sociopathic character more detached to human emotions, but it may be my impression. Finally and as a tip remember that Grindelwald is hated and wanted equally, so it is normal that he does not go in plain sight and that he is announced as Sirius Black in the third book in the Muggle news. Keep up the good work.
Author, I am very glad that you decided to rewrite your work. But could you please delete the previous chapters, this is misleading. I am also very glad that you decided to change the ideology from just killing all Muggles to controlling Muggles from the shadows. Why can't you kill all Muggles? The answer is simple. This is simply impossible, on the planet (at the time of 1990) 5.3 billion and on the strength of 30% are magicians and from 30% of about 20 they are half-breeds whether Muggle-born. Draw conclusions. It seems to me that Gellert should throw this idea, because in custody he had plenty of time to think it over and understand that his desire to kill all Muggles is simply ridiculous by the sheer number of these same Muggles.
